And here is the cover of the book *as I told before, it is my first time to do it ) , so I need your feedback to...

And here is the cover of the book *as I told before, it is my first time to do it ) , so I need your feedback to improve it and be professional like yours 😊
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FyYOlM2YIoz3FGMFZT7AGUWkdP65s-z3/view?usp=drive_web

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  1. Dorothy ZemachSeptember 21, 2018 at 10:37 AM

    Hi Taghrid, it says it's set to private. I requested permission, but could you change it so that everybody can see it? Barbara Hoskins Sakamoto can help you do that if you're having trouble.

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  2. Dorothy ZemachSeptember 21, 2018 at 11:44 AM

    Got it! This is a good start (and don't worry, it's everybody's first time to do it!).

    You're so shy.... hahaha. Man the title bigger. MUCH BIGGER. (I like that font, though--very friendly.)

    Then the subtitle--MAKE IT BIGGER.

    For your own name, remove the word "by." And then ... guess what? MAKE IT BIGGER.

    People will see ebook covers as tiny squares. So you want your title to be large enough for people to read it, even when the image is small.

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  3. Taghrid Abu SneidaSeptember 21, 2018 at 11:52 AM

    Dorothy Zemach Hi, yes, I checked the settings. Thank you for your feedback and thank you for your encouraging words. I will follow your comments. Did you get the introduction of the book?

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  4. Kate Cory-WrightSeptember 21, 2018 at 12:36 PM

    Hi Taghrid, well done on getting a cover! You're more decisive than me (I made 8 because I couldn't decide, lol). I agree with Dorothy - bigger, bigger, bigger... One question: it says "new teachers" but also "experienced teachers" on the cover. Does that mean they're experienced teachers but new to your institute? or something else??

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  5. Taghrid Abu SneidaSeptember 21, 2018 at 2:49 PM

    I am not decisive at all😁, ,I just designed one version because it was frustrating and I was afraid of not submit it before deadline .
    I meant by experienced teachers that the tips will be advised by the ecperinced teachers for the new teachers. I forgot the apostrophe after teachers 😊. Thank you Kate for your comments. I appreciate it.

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  6. Dorothy ZemachSeptember 21, 2018 at 3:06 PM

    Taghrid Abu Sneida Ha! That is exactly why we have deadlines! :) Well done.

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  7. Taghrid Abu SneidaSeptember 21, 2018 at 3:14 PM

    True. agree with you.

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  8. Kate Cory-WrightSeptember 21, 2018 at 7:57 PM

    Did you try it again in a larger font? I agree with Dorothy that it would look good if it was bolder. Also, it might be nice to play around with colours - maybe something “happier”, like green? Not sure. Anyway, you have lots of time to continue to play with it. The inside is probably more important for now! Good luck.

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  9. Taghrid Abu SneidaSeptember 21, 2018 at 10:21 PM

    Yes Kate I will make changes before the deadline.

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