Dorothy Zemach

Dorothy Zemach
Hi! This is Laura. What do you think about this story instead of Pete the Cat? I wrote it. Eager to read your and all my classmates' opinions. Have a great day!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mtA8irDSw9MdUCYCDcxUZkVcmaQu7IYXEROAR-7RZ7g/edit?usp=sharing

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  1. Laura PerrottaSeptember 11, 2018 at 6:22 PM

    Dorothy Zemach this is the other idea instead of Pete the Cat. What do you think?

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  2. Wilma LuthSeptember 11, 2018 at 8:24 PM

    I like this story. Very simple and with a rhythm that works well with young children.

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  3. Laura PerrottaSeptember 12, 2018 at 3:46 AM

    Wilma Luth thanks for your feedback!!

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  4. Kevin SteinSeptember 17, 2018 at 11:42 PM

    I think this is a hit. Simple, quick, but something children can identify with.

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  5. Laura PerrottaSeptember 18, 2018 at 3:29 AM

    Kevin Stein wow!!!! Thanks Kevin!!! I've never written a story before, haha

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  6. Dorothy ZemachSeptember 18, 2018 at 6:08 PM

    That's probably doable. So you'll have images after the text, or before? You could put a hard page break in to keep them together. The pages of text though will be very, very short...

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  7. Dorothy ZemachSeptember 18, 2018 at 6:11 PM

    Although maybe I should ask how large you wanted to make the images. I guess I was assuming large, like one screen full. Is that what you meant? Or smaller, that might be embedded in a paragraph of text?

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  8. Laura PerrottaSeptember 18, 2018 at 6:35 PM

    Dorothy Zemach large!, you assumed correctly, haha :)

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