Here are three versions of the introduction for my work in progress - Reflectively Recharge Your Teaching.

Here are three versions of the introduction for my work in progress - Reflectively Recharge Your Teaching. If you have the inclination, I'd love to know which one seems to introduce the ebook clearly? Which ones makes you want to keep reading?

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  1. Wilma LuthSeptember 8, 2018 at 10:00 PM

    Here's #2

    docs.google.com - Introduction #2 RRYT WL

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  2. Wilma LuthSeptember 8, 2018 at 10:01 PM

    Here's #3

    docs.google.com - Introduction #3 RRYT WL

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  3. Laura PerrottaSeptember 9, 2018 at 8:06 AM

    Wilma Luth 👏👏👏👏 I personally prefer #2.

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  4. Dorothy ZemachSeptember 9, 2018 at 10:46 AM

    I like #3 best, but with the addition of the part of #2 at the very end, the "how to use this book."

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  5. Wilma LuthSeptember 10, 2018 at 9:19 AM

    Laura PerrottaDorothy Zemach Thanks so much for taking the time to read each of them and for your comments. :-)

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  6. Laura PerrottaSeptember 10, 2018 at 9:35 AM

    Wilma Luth More than welcome

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  7. Gemma ArcherSeptember 24, 2018 at 1:29 PM

    I found number 2 really clear , like Dorothy, I really liked the 'how to use this book' section too.

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  8. Michael FreeSeptember 25, 2018 at 3:51 PM

    I agree with D. and G.: #2., especially for the clarity. Such a good idea, this!

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