Hello everyone, Almost everything has been finalised in my story. Only the info about the creators (Author and illustrator) is missing and I need to have a professional picture taken of me and my daughter, Evita (the illustrator), but I won't have the pic until mid November :(. Re the font type - I used Arial. Should I change to Times New Roman? I hope you can find a few minutes to write a comment on this almost-final draft of my story. I have a question: as you know Evita has done the illustrations, but the background was a bit greyish. I asked a graphic designer friend of mine to whiten the background for me and to do a few minor tweaks. I would like to ask her in the future to help me with the next books in the series, too. I like giving credit where the credit is due - where could I mention Stella's name? https://drive.google.com/open?id=1i1oWSFC_8YNVQq0o9OyIj0wYQMGjDlh1
In British English you do (although somehow it reads fine in the context of a short chant like this). Not sure if American English is different?
ReplyDeleteKate Cory-Wright Thank you, Kate. I would love to leave it without "the". Otherwise, I'll have t change the whole line, cause the number of syllables won't be right :/
ReplyDeleteYes. Keep it for now and see what other say!
ReplyDeleteIn a rhyme like this, we can throw our grammar books out the window. Worry not!
ReplyDeleteIF you want, and if the goal is to keep both 2nd and 4th line the same count, you could say "The seesaw's so much fun" and "And then we both fall down". Both 6 syllables.
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